Diamond Dazzle episode 1:My cutie mark story!

My name is Diamond Dazzle,I came from a very wealthy family which meant I never got to see my parents much when I was small.They were busy with the family business of mining for jewels.My older brother Ace Impact never lifts a hoof of help,but I've always loved helping everypony yet I was too small for mining.But that never stopped me for being a helpful pony I thought,"maybe this could lead to my cutie mark."
With anticipation going through my mind was going crazy like a squirrel in an all you can eat nut buffet.So I thought of everything I could do to help others I tried loopity hoop,but I broke it,actually I broke a few of them in case the first few meant that loopity hooping wasn't my special talent of helping.I then tried to fly kites and see if I can fly with others,but I got tied up in all the excitement, literally. Finally I tried to entertain everypony by skating and by doing amazing tricks.And of course I was a laughing stock because I  crashed into a sweet shop,how humiliating.
I felt as though I was going to give up,at that moment my horn started to glow and lead me to back of an abandoned bakery.Not only was my horn going out of control but my body was too.My body was swinging back and forth in such an odd dance while my horn had a mind of its own.I was in an infinite loop of spinning type of dance I could not see what my horn was up to.All I saw was dust floating in the air as I assume my horn opened the window to release the dust,spiderwebs,and filth.I began to think this madness would last forever but then i fell to the floor with noticing something went into the oven.I was baffled seeing what my horn and body has done.As I recovered I noticed in the oven muffins and on the counter top were sapphires and blue frosting.I thought to myself,"what is my cutie mark telling me?To make muffins or cupcakes?To make necklaces and bake?"
Suddenly a loud noise came from outside the town.It became more and more loud then began to be closer.It was strange so I went outside the bakery to see what was wrong and saw that a dragon was one its way to destroy the town.Ponies were running rampant,stallions were scurrying to higher ground and fillies were scared as they hid with their families.I then see the ferocious beast coming our way as it roars its mighty roar.My brother,Ace Impact sees me frightened of the beast.
"Diamond!Get out of there!Come to safety!We have to get outta here!"He yelled as he worried of his little sister.I then turn to see that my muffins were finished.I don't know why,but I went back inside the bakery got the goods out of the oven and crushed the jewels into the frosting and placed them on the goods.Thus creating diamond cupcakes,I came out of the bakery and went to see the mighty dragon.I hear my family cry out to me warning me to come back while I still can or save myself.I refused to listen,I wanted to save everyone.My hoofs stood to the ground as the dragon came up to my face and growled at me.I then threw into its mouth a diamond studded cupcake I bit my lip as my cupcake calmed the dangerous beast.I gave the dragon my batch of cupcakes and as soon as I did the dragon looked pleased as it flew away.
My knees became weak from the excitement I turn to the reactions of the towns people as they're marveled at my bravery.I become overwhelmed with appreciation and wave to everyone.Then my older brother nudges me and to turn around.I couldn't believe my eyes,it was my cutie mark!And not just any cutie mark it was a sapphire studded cupcake just like the one I made for the dragon.It was clear to me now my destiny is to protect my home against dragon!

Based used from My Little Pony Base #22 [Relaxed]
by ~DrugzRbad

As of today,5/7/14 
My OC is renamed,Diamond Dazzle